SAT写作范文赏析：拯救非洲大象

>>SAT写作赏析：SAT写作范文赏析：拯救非洲大象

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Leaving Mr. Treuhaft’s piano in Japan will not save African elephants. But it will further endanger them and diminish the lives of those who recognize and value the role of ivory in history and culture.

写作手法

echo(首尾照应)、appeal to emotion(煽情)

原文解析

作者在结尾处首尾照应(照应第三段)，再次提及新规不仅会阻碍Steinway钢琴回归美国，而且也挽救不了非洲大象遭屠杀的命运。更有甚者，不仅威胁到大象门的生产，也伤害了那些珍视象牙历史和文化人的颜面。从而再次有力地支撑了原文的中心思想。

高分表达

1. The repeated reference to the stuck of Treuhaft’s piano in japan echoes the previously expressed fact about the piano.

2. The essay concludes with a return to emotional appeal to remind the readers of the…

3. As the essay closes, the authors make a final plea for the good of elephant and those who “value the role of ivory in history and culture” by using a pragmatic appeal.

参考译文

把特罗伊哈夫特的钢琴留在日本拯救不了非洲大象，反而会置大象于更加危险的境地，令那些认识到并珍视象牙历史和文化价值的人们闻之变色。

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