SAT写作范文赏析：第1次世界大战

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第1次世界大战World War I

Jesse D. Examples of plans gone awry can also be seen through history. At the beginning of WWI, the German army developed a plan that they thought to be smart, quick and effective. The Schlieffen plan, which was formulated by German General Alfred Von Schlieffen, proposed knocking out France first with a lightening attack through neutral Belgium before turning on Russia. The plan, which seemed foolproof, failed as the Germans faced a surprise when the Belgians defended their homeland. This slowed the Germans down and lead to their loss against the French--and the eventual loss of the war.

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