SAT写作范文赏析：脸书的发展历程

>>SAT写作赏析：SAT写作范文赏析：脸书的发展历程

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Facebook 脸书

Amanda C. Lastly,creativity's ability to revolutionize the world is seen in the internet phenomenon,Facebook. Created only six years ago by the college student Mark Zuckerburg,the social networking site was once a small idea, overshadowed by the powerful MySpace. Now, Facebook has transcended MySpace in order to become a worldwide internet site with millions of users. Every day, more and more people are joining Facebook and Facebook vernacular has become a part of everyday conversations. Zuckerberg even said, "How on earth did we stalk our exes,remember our co-workers birthdays, or bug our friends before Facebook?" Facebook has truly changed the world through its creative content and ideas.

点评:

关于Facebook的发展历程，整个段落组织得相当不锗。"vernacular"这个词用得很好。扎克伯格的话也引用得很恰当。

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