2019年托福考试必读写作范文及思路5

写作是我们在考试中必不可少的一部分，先要在写作中获得高分，有一个方法就是要在文章中添加一些长难句或者漂亮的词组，小编为大家整理了这篇写作范文，在坦途网托福考试频道还有很多相关的内容和考试时间播报，现在一起来看看这篇文章吧！

What change do you want to make in a school you attended? If you could make one important change in a school that you attended, what change would you make? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer. 参见：[6]

『范文』 While the school system in China is generally quite good, there is one problem that I have found prevalent through all of my years of education. The problem is that the teacher to student ratio is too small. This situation was of no benefit to anyone: the teachers, or the students. If there were more teachers in each school, class sizes would be smaller, there would be a greater diversity of knowledge and information, and teachers would be less tired, and would therefore give better classes. Class sizes are overwhelmingly large in China. In many of the courses offered in elementary school and high school, there are over forty students in a class. It is very difficult to learn in this type of situation. The teacher has no time to spend with individual students who need extra help, and students are often embarrassed to ask questions in front of so many other students. If class sizes could be shrunk, the learning curve in most courses would rise dramatically. With more teachers at every school, the collective mass of knowledge and information would rise. Everyone in the world has his/her own very particular set of information. People are like snowflakes; each person is different and has varied experiences from the next person. With more people at a school, there is a wider knowledge base to draw from. This would obviously be an advantage to students, as schools could offer a wider range of courses in a variety of fields of study. Therefore, if I was given the opportunity to change one thing in the high school that I once attended, I would like to try to recruit more qualified teachers and give them more decent pays. This would benefit everyone. It is an unfortunate fact that most school districts cannot afford to make this happen.

这篇文章的内容到这里就结束了，在一篇优秀的文章中，我们可以记录他们优秀的词汇、词组和句子，积累到我们自己的素材库里，这样在我们写作的时候就可以随时添加到我们的文章中，小编还会持续为大家更新很多相关的内容和资讯，致力于服务好大家，希望在托福考试中大家都能考出一个比较满意的成绩