2018年托福写作范文：鹿角的作用

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托福写作考试日期：

2018年05月06日

新托福写作题目回忆版本一：

阅读——提出三个可能的作用

1. 用于散热。antlers里面有vessel,所以有血液循环 ,可以帮助散热。

2. 用于保护自己不受天敌捕杀(protect themselves against predators)。

3. 用于communicate和show dominance,因为鹿角hard and pointy。

听力——反驳

1. 不是用来散热的。因为有的鹿夏末也会长出角,甚至有的冬天也会长,可是冬天不需要散热。而且有的热的地方,鹿角小,在冷的地方,鹿角反而大。

2. 一般都是母鹿female deers保护小鹿,可是母鹿是没有角的。另外有证据表明他们的主要predator是狼 ,可是狼有被鹿kicking的痕迹。

3. 两个鹿一般都是走来走去walking up and down in parallel lines直到另一方走开,而反而一般是角大的鹿会走开。并且他们是会用叫几声的方式来表示自己的身份而不是鹿角。

新托福写作题目回忆版本二：

The first function of antlers is to assist deer to lose heat.

2、Secondly, the reading states that antlers may be used for self-defense against predators.

3、antlers may be used to battle other males for dominance. A deer that has larger antlers in a combat will be seen as a superior one.

听力:

1、the antlers of deer continue to grow even after summer is gone, indicating that they may not be used for heat loss. Besides, in places where temperature is higher, the antlers of deer seem to be smaller, further disproving this “heat loss” theory.

2、if antlers were used for self-protection, then we would have seen female deer also growing antlers because they are the ones protecting their young. Furthermore, we often see deer kicking with their front legs, rather than fighting with their antlers, when they are attacked by wolves.

3、often when two male deer confront each other, they use other tactics such as grunting, or walking around each other, to determine who is stronger. In some cases, it is the deer with larger antlers that go away.

【解析】本次考试的综合写作延续了过去经典的考法，听力与阅读在观点上完全呈现相反的状态，并且本次考试主要涉及的是跟动物学的特点相关的内容，在考生陌生的单词上几乎没有出现;而且双方的对应点对得非常的清楚，所以本次考试当中，考生能够很快的把握到重心，从而做出比较流畅的综合写作的呈现。该次综合写作没有对于考生产生任何的听力与阅读的阻碍。

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