2019年雅思考试写作素材：企业是否应承担责任

>>雅思考试素材：2019年雅思考试写作素材：企业是否应承担责任 

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Some people think as for companies，in addition to making money，they should also shoulder more social responsibilities，to what extent do you agree or disagree?有人认为，对于企业来说，除了盈利，企业应该承担更多的社会责任，是否同意?

是否同意类话题提问标志：

Some people think that …… to what extent do you agree or disagree?

点评：这是雅思和托福最经典的提问方式

写作思路：百分百支持(一边倒支持)

写作思路：三分让步，七分反驳(让步反驳)

写作步骤：

1.词汇替换：替换题目中关键词汇

2.主题观点：确立作家立场或者写作目的

3.思路拓展：思考支持反驳或者解释解决的理由

4.正文写作：个性开篇;套入模板;正文展开

5.仔细检查：检查词汇，句法，逻辑

高分策略：(按照评分标准)

1.题目为中心：明确回答问题，清晰论证问题

2.逻辑为纲要：清晰的谋篇布局

3.词汇为亮点：选择个性，多元，精彩的词汇表达

4.句型为基础：使用符合学术性论文写作的句型

语料库：

1.It is the unshakable obligation of every enterprise to create the maximum personal wealth for its employees. 企业要为员工创造更多的个人财富。

拓展：compelling responsibility = unshakable obligation n 不可推卸的责任

2.hence, worker's comfortable life can be ensured. 因此，可以保障员工们美好的生活。

3.Only when businesses achieve profitability can their employees remain royal to the organizations that they work for. Meanwhile，companies can remain competitive in the long run. 企业只有实现利益zui大化, 才能稳定员工, 永保竞争力。

解析：achieve profitability v盈利

4.At the initial stage of a company, great amounts of investments need to be put into employee training, the purchase of facilities, advertisement campaign and even the contrivance of new products.企业在创立之初，大量的资本需要投入到员工培训，购置设备，广告营销，新产品的研发。

解析：advertisement campaign n广告营销

解析：contrivance n 发明

5.Therefore, only economic incentive can motivate business leaders and employers to work harder. 因此，经济刺激是企业家和员工们努力工作的动力。

拓展：business leaders = enterprisers = entrepreneurs n 企业家

6.Enterprises must make their products compete for the lion's share in the market, then, companies can regain their former investments and realize sustainable development. 企业必须使其产品zui大化地占领市场份额，企业才能收回成本, 实现可持续发展。

解析：compete for the lion's share in the market v 竞争市场中zui大的份额

7.As for many enterprises，another embodiment of social responsibility is that …… 对于企业而言，社会责任的另外一种体现就是……

8.In time of natural disaster or when the disadvantaged needs assistance，enterprises are supposed to make generous donation and set a fine learning example. 自然灾害出现，或者是社会弱势群体需要帮助的时候，企业要主动捐助，树立标杆

解析：set a fine learning example for v树立标杆

解析：make generous donation v做出慷慨的贡献

解析：the disadvantaged n弱势群体

9.It is also the indication of social responsibility. 这也是社会责任的体现。

解析：indication n 象征

10.If a corporation never make profitable deal by hook or crook，conversely，all its businesses abide by the law and social morality，then，it also embodies its social value. 企业遵纪守法，不为盈利而不择手段，这也是企业社会责任的体现。

解析：never make profitable deal by hook or crook 不会不择手段地盈利

解析：by hook or crook 不择手段

解析：abide by the law v 守法

拓展：never violate the social morality v不违反社会道德

11.If a business can remain prosperous by honest hard work，then， it can provide a number of job opportunities，which can greatly reduce the pressure of social unemployment …… 企业努力经营，获得成功，就可以提供更多的工作岗位，缓解社会就业的压力，因此，这也是企业社会责任的一种体现。

解析：then， more job opportunities can be created 更多的工作机会可以被创造

解析：reduce the pressure of social unemployment v 缓解了社会就业的压力

拓展：corporation = enterprise = business = company n企业

点评：BBC= British Broadcasting Corporation，所以，corporation 指的是大型的企业财团

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