2019年1月12日雅思写作大作文真题及范文解析

>>雅思真题：2019年1月12日雅思写作大作文真题及范文解析

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Task 1

类型 扇形图

题目 The charts below show the hours male and female workers work a week in government institutions and private

companies. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

范文解析

饼图

描述的是男性职员和女性职员在政府机关和私人企业每周工作时长的区别。分段上可以以周工作时长来分为两段。同时，注意同意词和代词指代的使用来避免重复以及比较的表达。

范文(红色字体为高分结构或表达)

The four pie charts compare how many hours male and female workers work per week in government institutions and private companies. Up to 66% government workers( 30% male ones and and 36% female ones ) work more than 46 hours a week, while only 4% female employees in private companies work so long, considerably lower than that for their male counterparts(34%). However, fewer workers work 31-45 and 13-30 hours a week in government institutions than in private companies. To be more specific, as few as around 10% male and female employees are at work for that time , compared with approximately 23% in private companies.

Although there are 50% workers working 6-12 hours every week in total in both institutions, the figure for women workers in private companies is as many as 35%, different from that for private company male employees (merely 15%) , and for male and female government staff (23% and 27% separately). 23% government male workers work 1- 2hours each week, 18% higher than that for those in private companies. It is interesting that the proportion of female workers who are at work 1-2 hours a week in government institution is the same as that in private companies, with both accounting for 18%.

Overall, most employees work more than 46 hours and 6-12 hours in government institutions and private companies.

字数 200 words

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