2019年1月5日雅思写作真题及范文解析

>>雅思真题：2019年1月5日雅思写作真题及范文解析

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Task 1

类型 柱形图

题目

The chart below shows how four European countries deal with their cities waste in four different ways. Four countries: Netherland，Italy，Spain，UK Four ways：landfill，recycle，biologically treated，burnt

范文解析

该柱图展示了四个国家使用四种不同的方式处理垃圾的百分比。考生在处理图形信息时，注意重点描述最常用的方法以及使用概率低的方法。此外，还需注意对比用其他方法处理垃圾的百分比。因此建议把通过填埋和燃烧处理的垃圾百分比放在主体段第1段描述;另外两种方法放在主体段第二段描述。

范文

The bar chart demonstrates the percentage of urban waste dealt with via four methods in four different countries. Apparently, landfill is the most common means to dispose garbage in three countries, namely Italy, Spain, each copes with 45% and 40% respectively, and UK with the majority of waste (60%). In contrast, the least of trash is buried in the land in Netherland. It is interesting to note that most of waste (50%) there is burnt while this way is not widely applied in other nations especially in UK, which only burn 10% of waste.

Regarding to the proportion of waste treated biologically, Italy and Netherland deal with the same amount, at 20% meanwhile the figure in Spain and UK is similar (30%). Except for UK, the remaining three nations recycle more waste compared with those treated with the biological technique, and the percent of recycled waste in Italy doubles that treated biologically.

Overall, it can be seen that among four states the higher rate of urban waste is disposed through traditional methods; environment-friendly ways are utilized to treat small number of garbage.

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Task 2

类型 体育类

题目

Some people think the fittest and strongest individual help achieve success in sport. Some people believe success is much related to mental attitude. Discuss both of the view and your own opinion.

范文解析

该题目属于体育类双边讨论。有些人认为体能强壮的运动员更容易在体育中取得成功，而另一些人认为心态更重要。要求讨论两种观点并且给出自己的观点。双边讨论类的题目建议在开头段交代背景，陈述两种观点，自己的立场可以先不表明。中间主题段需要充分讨论两种观点的原因，就像法官判案需要原告被告各方陈述自己的理由，最后给出自己的判断。

文章结构

P1：交代背景，引出话题，段落间过渡句;

P2：主体段，体能强壮的人更容易取得成功的原因;

P3：主体段，心态更重要的原因;

P4：表明自己的观点 身体素质是前提，心理素质更关键。

高 分 话 题

waned 消逝的

表达(范文中 红 色 字体)

perseverance 坚持不懈   physical attribute 身体素质   in terms of 在...方面   abundant and adequate 充足大量的

earnest and hard 认真艰苦的   emotional intelligence 情商   top tier teams 顶级球队

distinguished from 表现突出   determinant 决定性的

高 分 结 构( 范 文 中蓝色字体)

opinions differ over whether 宾语从句   which is generally known as 解释论证

based on the fact that 同位语从句    what really sets apart the top winners is 主语从句

This can be exemplified 举例论证    Only through 主句需倒装

范文

Human’s enthusiasm to sports and races has never waned, which demonstrates people’s perseverance, struggle, unity and cooperation. However, opinions differ over whether physical strength or mental attitude is of more significance in sports accomplishment. In this essay, both factors will be analyzed and my personal perspective will be presented.

On the one hand, some people opine that success primarily hinges on powerful physical attribute. In fact, in many countries, professional athletes are selected by particular criteria in terms of power, flexibility, strength and so on. In

addition to that, they need abundant and adequate power to finish the competition successfully. All champions win the

golden medals through earnest and hard physical training, based on the fact that persistent training can promote athletes’ skills such as diving, resilience or else to achieve excellent performance.

On the other hand, others argue that it is easy and appropriate to attribute achievement to the talent factor and physical fitness, yet many of the sportsmen have these, so what really sets apart the top winners is their ability to

manage their emotions. Emotional intelligence, which is generally known as the ability to identify, assess, and control the emotions of oneself, of others, and of groups. This can be exemplified by 2018 FIFA World Cup Russia which

attracted the top tier teams with the best players from around the world. The champion France National Men's football team distinguished from the rest by mental status of its members who could motivate each other to unite and work towards a single objective. 

I personally believe that physical strength is a premise to become successful sportsmen, which ensures a good performance but psychological quality, always plays a more determinant role especially in some international games like the Olympic Games where one represents a nation and shoulders tremendous pressure. Only through the intelligent use of balanced emotions combined with the physical talent, can success be attained.

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