雅思考官大作文指导：改善城市居住环境

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今天带来一篇大作文，题目如下：

More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?

这是一篇Problem and solution类型的大作文。首先在写作文之前，大家先思考4个问题：

·Can you see why we call this a "problem and solution" question?

·Which words are used instead of "problem" and "solution"?

·How can we write a 2-sentence introduction for this question?

·What ideas do you have for the main paragraphs?

第1， 你知道为什么我们将这种作文称作"problem and solution"类型吗?

第2， 哪些单词可以用来替换"problem" and "solution"?

第3， 对于这种题目，如何写出一个两句话的开头段落呢?

第4， 对于主体段的内容，你有什么想法?

每次在写作文之前呢，大家都要养成勤于思考的习惯，看到一个作文题目，就要主动地去联想这个话题下的一些可写的内容，头脑风暴练习久了自然就不愁作文没话可写了。

接下来，给出这篇作文的大致写作框架和内容：

Essay structure and ideas:

1. Introduction: introduce the topic, then give a general answer

2. Difficulties: cost of living, unemployment, stress, traffic congestion, pollution

3. Solutions: social housing, reduce migration by improving small towns and the rural economy, improve public transport, fewer cars

4. Conclusion: repeat / summarise

文章框架和内容：

第1段，引入主题，然后给出回答。

第2段，可以写入文章的在城市居住的困难有居住成本，失业，压力，交通阻塞，污染等

第3段，解决方案有住廉租房，通过提高小城镇和边远地区经济来减少人中迁徙，改善公共交通，减少车辆等

结尾段，重复并总结

从雅思考官给的文章段落结构可以看出，他还是一贯地用了四段式的写法，每段的内容也都分工明确，逻辑清晰，同学们可以多加学习。然后前雅思考官还给出了他的开头段：

Introduction:

Cities are often seen as places of opportunity, but there are also some major drawbacks of living in a large metropolis. In my opinion, governments could do much more to improve city life for the average inhabitant.

雅思考官还是保持了开头段只用两句话的写作方法，虽然只有两句话，但是足够起到了引入主题和给出答案的作用。这种言简意赅的写作方法是备受雅思写作考官喜欢的一种开头段写法，各位考生今后练习的时候应该多多尝试。

话不多说，接下来送给大家考官满分范文：

Here's my full sample essay for question below.

More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?

Cities are often seen as places of opportunity, but there are also some major drawbacks of living in a large metropolis. In my opinion, governments could do much more to improve city life for the average inhabitant.

The main problem for anyone who hopes to migrate to a large city is that the cost of living is likely to be much higher than it is in a small town or village. Inhabitants of cities have to pay higher prices for housing, transport, and even food. Another issue is that urban areas tend to suffer from social problems such as high crime and poverty rates in comparison with rural areas. Furthermore, the air quality in cities is often poor, due to pollution from traffic, and the streets and public transport systems are usually overcrowded. As a result, city life can be unhealthy and stressful.

However, there are various steps that governments could take to tackle these problems. Firstly, they could invest money in the building of affordable or social housing to reduce the cost of living. Secondly, politicians have the power to ban vehicles from city centres and promote the use of cleaner public transport, which would help to reduce both air pollution and traffic congestion. In London, for example, the introduction of a congestion charge for drivers has helped to curb the traffic problem. A third option would be to develop provincial towns and rural areas, by moving industry and jobs to those regions, in order to reduce the pressure on major cities.

In conclusion, governments could certainly implement a range of measures to enhance the quality of life for all city residents.

(273 words, band 9)

以上即为今天分享的精华内容了，大家都学到了吗？方法已经准备好，后面最为重要的就是实践练习，在写作过程中感受雅思大作文的题型特点，多加总结，相信你一定会收获很多。同时，坦途网雅思考试频道正在更新更多优质备考资料，更有适合你的学习技巧等你发现！