雅思考官大作文指导：私立教育与公立教育

>>雅思作文范文：雅思考官大作文指导：私立教育与公立教育

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今天要讲一篇Family Topic大作文。题目如下：

Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

对于这种问你同意与否的作文，前雅思考官做出如下指示：

If the question asks whether you agree or disagree, you need to make your opinion very clear. You can either have a strong opinion or a balanced opinion.

今天我们先来说一下如何写一篇Strong Opinion的作文。前雅思考官说，When you have a strong opinion, you don't need to mention the opposite view.是的，你若表达Strong Opinion，则无需提反方观点！现在开始写作文，按照前几期讲过的写作的顺序，第1步，Plan Structure:

1. Introduction: 1 sentence to introduce the topic, 1 sentence to make your opinion clear (e.g. I completely disagree...)

2. Main paragraph: support your opinion with a reason

3. Main paragraph: support your opinion with another reason

4. Conclusion: repeat/summarise your opinion

第2步: brainstorm then organise

大家一起来头脑风暴the ideas for a“completely disagree”answer.以下是前雅思考官想到的Ideas:

difficult to calculate the tax reduction

more government staff would be required for this process

we all pay for public services that we may not need e.g. police

poorer people would pay more tax than wealthy people

state schools benefit the whole of society

high quality state education leads to equal opportunities for all

a well-educated workforce is the key to a prosperous nation

companies need educated staff

we should all be happy to contribute to public services

头脑风暴之后，我们要将它们组织归纳成两个段落，从上面这些Ideas来看，似乎可以把它们分成两大主题：

1. Reasons why we think the idea would not work, or would be unfair.

2. Reasons why everyone should pay taxes that support state education.

在给出完整范文之前，再跟大家讲解一下前雅思考官是如何建议大家规划整个大作文的写作时间的：

You have 40 minutes for writing task 2, and I suggest that you:

Spend the first 10 minutes planning your essay structure and brainstorming ideas for the two main body paragraphs.

Spend 5 minutes writing your 2-sentence introduction.

Spend 20 minutes on the main body (10 minutes for each paragraph).

Spend the last 5 minutes writing your conclusion and checking everything.

完整范文：

Some people believe that parents of children who attend private schools should not need to contribute to state schools through taxes. Personally, I completely disagree with this view.

For a variety of reasons, it would be wrong to reduce taxes for families who pay for private education. Firstly, it would be difficult to calculate the correct amount of tax reduction for these families, and staff would be required to manage this complex process. Secondly, we all pay a certain amount of tax for public services that we may not use. For example, most people are fortunate enough not to have to call the police or fire brigade at any time in their lives, but they would not expect a tax reduction for this. Finally, if wealthy families were given a tax discount for sending their children to private schools, we might have a situation where poorer people pay higher taxes than the rich.

In my opinion, we should all be happy to pay our share of the money that supports public schools. It is beneficial for all members of society to have a high quality education system with equal opportunities for all young people. This will result in a well-educated workforce, and in turn a more productive and prosperous nation. Parents of children in private schools may also see the advantages of this in their own lives. For example, a company owner will need well qualified and competent staff, and a well-fundededucation system can provide such employees.

In conclusion, I do not believe that any financial concessions should be made for people who choose private education.

(269 words, band 9)

词汇总结：

tax reduction: 削减税收

fire brigade: 消防局

well-educated: 受良好教育的

concession: 妥协

well-funded: 资金充裕的

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