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考官simon雅思图表小作文9分范文 饼图:三地用水

2017年06月22日 11:52:59来源:雅思考试网
导读:为大家分享前考官simon演示的9分雅思小作文。考官亲笔,用最正统的4段式写作,本文主题-饼图:三地用水,共168词。苦于小作文的烤鸭们,赶快来学习吧。

>>雅思小作文:考官simon雅思图表小作文9分范文 饼图:三地用水

请看本文前考官同学的精彩演绎。饼图:三地用水,共168词,band 9。考官的四段套路:introduction+review+2 details。

话题:

The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.

范文

The pie charts give information about the water used for residential, industrial and agricultural purposes in San Diego County, California, and the world as a whole.

It is noticeable that more water is consumed by homes than by industry or agriculture in the two American regions. By contrast, agriculture accounts for the vast majority of water used worldwide.

In San Diego County and California State, residential water consumption accounts for 60% and 39% of total water usage. By contrast, a mere 8% of the water used globally goes to homes. The opposite trend can be seen when we look at water consumption for agriculture. This accounts for a massive 69% of global water use, but only 17% and 28% of water usage in San Diego and California respectively.

Such dramatic differences are not seen when we compare the figures for industrial water use. The same proportion of water (23%) is used by industry in San Diego and worldwide, while the figure for California is 10% higher, at 33%.

(168 words, band 9)

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